Some changes that my peers have suggested is to add charts. I feel that I may do this, because in most of the peer reviewed articles that I am reading, they have also included charts. I will include charts to clearly explain the differences between blood cell counts and the severity of aplastic anemia.
I will also include pictures of what a healthy individual’s bone marrow looks like, compared to that of an individual’s bone marrow with aplastic anemia. I have some terms that I still need to define more clearly. I would like to include more of my personal experience to the paper.
